"Breath" stinks up this place , like a smelly fart in the food court
He could be spitting off da 1st Floor, but his words still fall short
whack set up and delivery
You ain't got Shit ,No way in Hell you Come Correct
This Little Faggot , is about to get Train Wrecked
weak..played
Let me Inter-Ject my Ill-thoughts and Feelings
I Spit Special Effects, Dat leaves ya Head Reeling
weak..no real punch
Your Nothing to me , and you can't Spit a Rythme/Beat
Imma Fuck you so Hard , you'll be walking with Crows Feet
what?
You got balls challenging me , I must admit, but be warned
Custer had Balls too , when he got slayed, at Little BigHorn
good meta


Loopin a hint while CrazyE chose to battle a monster, like he was on halloucinogens,
You can rap 10 verses in 5 languages, but they still ain't 'fluent atempts',
kinda stretched but nice
I ruin amends, slam you till you get to a studio, and you'll be 'threw in a sense',
Have your truest of friends turn backwards on you, like they sense 'you in the bitch',
kinda weak
Grabbing my dick with a vice-grip is the only way you'd give a 'piece of advice',
You got feces to bite, drop 10 lines, I'll give you 10 reasons you shouldn't be keeping ya life,
stretched again...ok..but kinda played
I'll touch your words, say 'I hurt your feelings', after I crush your nerves,
Wax on, you got much to learn, this bitch is bubblegum, the way he's stuck to curbs,
decent
Jinkies this dude is garbage, he's just a 'pup meddler', like Scooby Doo,
From Susie Q? Quick, you need to add a D to your name, like Cuba Goo-.
ehh kinda weak

Brethren wins this..he had harder and more creative personals and punches and metas. An overall good verse. CrazyE came with too many played lines and wasn't too original/creativie in his verse. Vote-Breth

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