when u come face to face wit my colt its gon do more than chip
the damage is something that cant be conprehended
dun rhyme...no flow...played punch
Im like a navy seal Im just searching
when I see a whack ass rapper there I am and Im lurking
bad flow...weak punch
coming against me is ur ultimate mistake
its a an error for which u shall pay
no punch
u say that 4-0 record
well prepare to get a 1 on the loss and a ride on the strecher
blah
this battle may be good and it may lead too much perstiance
but the only thing this oak ridge rapper is gon' do is wipe ur existance
weak


You call that shit a verse? and prewritten With a week to rehearse?
Ya need ta speak to a nurse. Cause blood about ta leak through ya shirt
ok punches
I spontaneously come-bussin caps, wit Russian gats, that's crushing cats.
There MIGHT b a verse that can out-class me, but I guarantee, it wasn't that
1st line was whack..useless multis..second line ok
you should lose on even ONE vote. Cause when I drop these ill rhymin lines
I guarantee~ya~see~a~loss, but judgin from ya spit, it will NOT be mine
played
rhymes that i spit are alot hotter than fire, and deeper than 6 oceans
it would b best if i kill ya in this battle, coz dead rappers get better promotion
nice
this is a fairy tale for ya,hey cindarella its been good to know ya
so remember this little bitch just after 12 o'clock this battle woz over.
ehhplayed but ok

Z- Check whackness emergency center dawg ta get help with ya battles. You gotta come more creative in ya lines....Use less filler and try and rhyme ya words.
Timeless- good overall verse, you had some filler in ther but you had some nice lines too. Some of ya shit was a lil stretched, but ok.

Please drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337