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Old 02-07-04, 09:19 PM   #17
Brethren
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Punches: Lyric, Breeze had very weak punches, if he had any.
Wordplay: Lil, he had about 3 wordplays, Lyric had none. Lilbreeze, step up your wordplay though.
Multis: Lil, he had mostly 1-3 syllables, Lyric had all 1 syllables
Personals: Lyric, most of his verse was personals, good job coming up with those.
Opener: Lyric, opened decent, Breeze opened with a wack punch
Closer: Tie, both closed very wackly.

Vote - Lyric

LilBreeze, you need to step up, make your lines longer, think up some creative punches, but not too creative. Lyric you gotta flip some multis, your verse could sound a lot harder.

if u underestimate me, then rethink how ya "thought of me"
cuz i could cut the blood flow from ya heart like ya missen an "artery"
Def, LilBreeze's best bar

How the fuck you ever get four wins, with your faulty lyrics man?
Fo real tho, must have more dickriders than RB has useless spam
Best bar, but you could've mad that into a wordplay easily
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