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Old 02-07-04, 09:29 PM   #12
Brethren
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Basically he took every category. Z was insulting himself in his verse, did not rhyme half of the time, and had no real punches. Time takes punches, definitely multis, had a mutli every line with about 3 syllables. Z had only 1 syllable IF he rhymed, which he didn't even do. Nobody takes wordplay, none there. Personals, nobody had any. Liked the dead promotions line, liked the multis, flowed very well. Time, you need to add some wordplay from complexity, Z you need to rush to wackness hospital quickly, you are in critical condition. Z, don't insult yourself in your verse, stay focused, create some punches, wordplay, and mainly, rhyme.
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