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Old 02-07-04, 09:43 PM   #13
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Timeless-better punches, completly took
structure/and/flow other guys wuz whack
as shit... you came overall harder and better
Ive seen better form you... dont look like you
really tryed here... ya had more multis...
didnt see any from other guy, didnt see
personals form either of ya...

now for...
zikio-shiity punches not very good...
they were really weak and/or played
or you just had none... your metafors
just NO you really need to elevate
you have a horirble structure and flow
you need to work on everything....
flow/structure/multis/punches/metas/
personals/etc...<elevate all them

My Vote/TIMELESS...return tha favor wit honets votes on these battles...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110949
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