i think u should re-do this because i said u were sloppy in it, if u really want this song to get to people u needa do it to ur full skill...
*listenin now*
beats nice, intro of it is nice, kinda brings the emotion in.
your voice is good, and the background is good
quality is good man, mic is good
lyrics are good, some lines didnt flow as good as the others
emotional song, can i do the hook? fucka the other guy
thats about it, its nice, you should re-do some lines
Pz