^^ liked that

anyway about the poem, i often wonder about life itself, the meaning, why we are here, whats the point, ect, but i havent yet wrote a poem about my thoughts on life itself that actually got very far, for i become lost, with too many questions and stupid answers to continue. i like how you took your ideas and wrote them out, the structure made it seem like you were writting everything as it came to you, its all so natural feeling. you used good detail. vocab coudl be brought up thou. flow was basic. but it was the content of this piece that is striking. thou your thoughts on life differ some from mine, im able to understand where your coming from your thoughts you put in this. it was a nice read.

~Tera~
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