Optimus what were you doing this aint no fuckin bone thugs and harmony man dont be trying to do dat shit were you rhyme more in one line, because people are gonna jus pass your shit up. Optimus need to really work on your wording and wordplay and it might of been good if you could actually write, da bottom line is elevate a lot man!!!!!!
Intoxicated did a much better job than optimus overall, in every category Intoxicated was holding it down....no what i mean. Da best line from dis battle dat made a win to me is da optimus prime line which was sick illness. Intoxicated was pretty good too jus elevate your metaphors but overall you good with your punches and shit, keep it up.
vote= Intoxicated
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