Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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i thought both pieces approached the topic well, and had great content. both had a good flow and rhyme scheme, but i felt that EZ's piece had a little more emotion and better content in it. found it a bit more interesting. thou i liked mentill's rhyme scheme better my vote goes to EZ.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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