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Old 02-08-04, 12:11 AM   #7
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Flow = Brethren
Structure= Brethren
Punches=brethren
Personal=brethren
Wordplay=brethren

Crazy-> you didn't come hard enough. your punches didn't hit hard enough and your word play was invisible. you should keep writin' though, you'll get better.

Brethren-> Your flow was nice and you kept it going with some good hits dawg. You had some nice personals and you didn't do too bad with the wordplay

VOTE-> Brethren... just had the better verse this time around.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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