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Old 02-08-04, 12:29 AM   #12
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From: PenNsyLvaNIa
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this is a great piece... good twist at end of
first verse... I liked the way Diverse said
goin back to sleepp that wus Ill...
well written I don't really see anything to
fix within' this OpenMic it's just perfect
draws a good picture to what your talking
about... overall i say a 9/10 but not penskillz good lol...
yall dope keep at it...
hit up the open mics in my sig CV:Reppin' and MAKE SURE
that you Peep Satan's Contract
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