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Old 02-08-04, 02:01 AM   #7
Aisle Phive
AKA Cereal Shelf
 
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From: New Jersey
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Sorry Fue, I wasn't feelin this drop for shit, it was waaay forced, and was a lot of failed witty attempts, dunno dogg, I really didn't like any of those lines, the structure was way hard to follow, you need to stop that structure. Four lines for one bar is not nessecary at all.

N Litend, your verse was aight, you had a few dope punches. The catch your breath line and the recruiting rookie lines were nice, everything else was decent. Enough for the win.

Vote - N LitEnd

Psst, vote on me vs Def Con, we only have three votes.

That goes to Fue, Mystik voted on mine already.
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