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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP:
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Thrust
What the fuck? kerrdizzy? aka an now Thrust?...
This kid holds as much value as Compton Trust
Merkins a must....
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Meh..Iffy Opener.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Remove the rust, an what u got?its Soft Focus...
Shit..If your a vette then Ima Lotus....
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Good Punch. Kinda Funny.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Dont get pissed if u dont come away with this,..
Its elevated....In here u can't play Gynacologist
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LOL. Good.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
what happened?...Man I thought u were better?
O wait....I get it..No more ghost writes from Vendetta
Fuck it....
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Decent Attempt At A Personal.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Ima say it here,Execs an focus aint in the same hemisphere
I mean it's not geneticly possible....U can't son ur peers
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Nah. Wasn't Feelin This Closer.
Man this was a week verse...Punches were kinda there..but it's like your a flyweight throwin. Your Opener and Closer lacked. Need a some elevation.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
Jet went to McDonald's..Fuck the hoe decided to come back..
Even with all the excessive fats..It's heavy weight status he lacks!
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Decent Opener.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
The Execs are done, Through bitch, It's been over with...
Ever since..You joined the crew...soon went out taktik!
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Meh.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
It's obvious, We were all newbs, Well.. You still remain...
The kid we shit on..Remeber it's just the same ol' same!
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No Punch.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
Writer's block..Ah..Well you probably know the feeling right?
Cuz all ya do is fillers with occasional pre-writes!
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A Punch...decent.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
You've been around a while...But never causing much hype..
He'd only be noticed...When he has the talent to bite lines
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Meh. Okay Closer. At Least You Had One.
This was a okay verse. Your punches need to be there...this was really non existant...
OVERALL:
vote: Thrust.
this was a whack battle but Thrust actually had a closer and opener.
Elevate.
Check My Sig For Battles.
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Fuck Bruklor aka Self.
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