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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP:
Good Verses Both Of You.
TheUnderRated- I think you were trying to make up imagery with lengthed lines..It didn't work. I wasn't really feeling this...your POV's were interesting but it just didn't click. The components of a good topical just weren't there.
Rule- For keyed..this was really good. As a topical verse..I feel you had more elements and had some wicked imagery without even working to hard. You get my vote for a having a better verse. Good Job. Keep Droppin
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