i like how you divided it up into three different segments to show the timeline...nice multis and vocab, good imagery and it wasn't difficult to relate to...pretty dope the way you expressed it..all in all, not a bad piece...hit up my collab w/speek ez in open mic called "The Darker Side of Love" whenever you get the chance..pz

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