This beat is not bad man.....I just think it needs a bit more depth....don't take it personally......I feel theres sumthin missin.....

Maybe a synth sound or sumthin that can tie in with the sound of this.....it just needs an extra touch......mess with it......I'm sure you'll find sumthin man.....

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