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Old 02-08-04, 06:00 AM   #8
Provoked Images
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From: Tha heart of tha devil
IP:

it was aight..
you had tha vocab down and tha flow but tha topic fell off so many times both from tha title and as a whole...It made me lost here and there...
also, you fell off at tha end a lil...
tha begginning was a lil slow to get into...
tha middle was strong and if tha whole flow was written that same way i would've seem it as a better piece...

overall: good drop n keep it up 8 / 10
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