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Old 02-08-04, 08:11 AM   #6
Pariah
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Diverse vs Brainstorm

IP:

Flow: First off, Brainstorm reading your shit was down right painful.
Due to the fact that your structure was way fucked up. The
// were wack and I had to strain to identify any flow you might
of had. Diverse on the other hand, had a nice smooth flow and
a simple structure that was above all easy to read. In my mind
Diverse gets this category because his shit acctually flowed and
wasn't a pain in the ass to read.

Punches: Brainstorm was seriously lacking in this category. He had a
few punches, but they were weak and uncreative. Diverse's
punches were good and by for more creative/direct. Diverse
easily gets this.

Brainstorm: " hes gross hes a fag he lives i dont know where tryin to rap as his cool corear but he lives in fear of the day it comes out that he wares gurls underwear" He's gross?... lol, this shit was wack!

Personals: This is where Diverse really killed him. Flat out destroyed
Brainstorm, with the personals about his hometown,
his birthday, name, and the way he wrote his verse.
Brainstorm attempted to flip Diverse's name, but it
came out weak.

Diverse: " From Beantown? got some coffee lemme finish it first
it's the only way i'll ever finish this kids endless verse
looks like his brainstorm turned into a week long shower
10 minutes spits means he can actually have an hour" LOL... Nice personals.. hit too hard for Brain' to even recover

Vocab: Basic vocab from both, but of the two , Brain could use
some elevation. Nothin' to special from Diverse either, but
it really didn't matter because his shit flowed nicely.

Creativity: Great creativity from Diverse, loved the personals and the
punches were not bad either... hit hard. Brainstorm
should do as his name implies and brainstorm. Lacked any
real creativity, mostly played ideas that led to some
weak punches.

Overall: It probably doesn't need to be said, but Brain' didn't really
stand a chance. Diverse's shit wasn't complex with equisite
vocab or wordpaly, but it didn't need to be. Bottomline,
his punches and especially his personals hit hard. Not to
mention that his shit apparently flowed better and had a
simple, but nice, structure. The biggest problem for Brain'
I thought was his structure and flow. If your shit is that
hard of a read, the fact is noboby is going to want to
read it. Work on making the lines the same length, instead of
stretching them. This combined with better, more creative
punches is way more effective. Also work on including
personals, they can be the devastating to an opponent
if done right. Typical results when a newb takes on a vet.
Like I said before I cant officially vote but if I could
I would undoubtedly vote: Diverse