I thought this was an ill drop. Your flow was nice, and you had an ill rhyme cheme. The content was pretty decent. Emotion was decent. this was an enjoyable read, and worth the time. I've read 5 OMs so far today, and this was the most enjoyable so faw. Keep up the good work.

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