This was a pretty decent piece. Ed, your verse was nice. The flow was cool. The emotion was there, and it was a pretty easy read. Nice verse. Pen, you had a good verse too. I like the way you word things. The feeling was there in this verse too. It was an enjoyable read. Nice collabo, fellas.
Ed, please drop feed here:
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