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Old 02-08-04, 12:01 PM   #5
cameronj86
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Quote:
Originally Posted by wogzta
Notes:
L.S = Lyrical Soldiers
Paki = Pakistani
Artificial = A.I in his sig

Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
heard this concept before
"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
I liked this one
I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
set up was blah, but I liked the ending
Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
the last line had a bad setup but okay finisher
My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
wack finish
Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
didn't like this line, and I like nas
There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
I liked your "instant" line etter than his for what it's worth
that's 14... good luck



Quote:
Originally Posted by illtalic
You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
Half assed has been done b-fore. alright i guess
This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
I liked the finish but ste up was lacking
You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
nice finish
I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
weak, the fam thing was forced
See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
blah, already used an "instant" line
Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
I like this even tho I've heard it b4
Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...
better closer


I was going to vote for wogzta but the more I look at it, the more i feel that illtalic had more...: vote illtalic