Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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i liked the concept behind this piece, was interesting. you toook your thoughts straight out, and wrote them well. rhyme and structure were basic and simple, and vocab was plain. but it was a vent, you showed emotion well and got your thoughts out good. was a nice read.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
PS. do things for yourself not for others.
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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