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Middle Weight
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IP:
v/ rapidfire.
Why? Not only did his opponent feed off of his verse, Rapid also had better punchlines. They were more effective...even tho the Janet Jackson one is played to death. Machavelli...your verse was ok but it just ain't workin...you needa add sum creativity in der so ur punches can make us go "dammm".
"you ain't gonna expose me any way shape or form/
i got you trapped in the endless mother fuckin storm!!//"
You can make it more creative, like...
"There ain't no way you can expose me in any way, shape, or form
cuz you can't eye what i'm doin...your in the middle of this storm!"
^Like a hurricane...eye of the hurricane...it ain't the best example but u get what I'm trying 2 say right...make ya punchlines more creative.
Both return the favour and drop an honest vote on one of my battles please. Thank you.
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