OK HERES HOW IT WENT

PITCH BLACK = GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE, BUT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS LACKED BIG TIME. VOCAB WERNT REALLY GOOD EITHER.

Brethren = ALSO GOOD FLOW, STUCTURE WAS A BIT PATCHY, YOU HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS. AND VOCAB WAS DECENT.

FLOW = BRE
STRUC = PITCH
PUNCHES = BRE
PERSONALS=BRE
VOCAB=BRE

VOTE BRE

CAN YA PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG THANKS.

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