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IP:
Auspicious fucked this up pretty good...
Much better wordplay...
And even a recycled line from me (opposite day)!
The personals were much too hard and on mark.
The "sarcastic" and the Feeble quote killed this...
I liked Horud's opener, but, really it was kinda all alone as far as dopeness.
"Stairmaster" was eh..."Drowned" was a bit of a played concept.
All around better and more impactful...
Aus
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