hey man what u using to record, i would say just try to get a better mic thats what i did on my new stuff and that made the difference right dere. not a bad track, i thought it was put together good and u just need to keep making songs man cause really good shit comes in time, and just work with your levels and try to get a new mic
peace

and im a white boy too man i understand b one z or what ever his name is is giving you shit but whats that got to do with being white, take care man

keep on keeepin on

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