x-girl:
so far it sounds like you can do a little better cleaning out some of those vocal pops..energy and style is tite..lyrics and delivery arent bad either..i think i have this beat..

i am:
this is dope..i'm feeling your style over such a cliche beat..i myself wouldnt choose this beat for anything..but you infact broke it off well..dope job man..

all in all both tracks were nice man..i think you're dope..keep it up..

pZ..

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