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pretty good I liked the basic storylien to this...
it's been done alot but you actually put some
good imagery into this... pretty dope...
Ps-yeah liek pen sed dont use pink and red they are fruity...
plsu they hurt my eyes took me 5 mins to read the pink verse...
lol overall good...(cept for colors)
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