Thread: double-0 seven vs whitelightning (Topical, 2nd Half Of Slips)
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Old 02-08-04, 02:44 PM   #8
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Good topical battle.
White--I liked your details describing the emotion same structure as 007, and flow.some good vocab and nice mukties very good piece...I liked it a lot.

007- good piece..some nice details and imagery but not as consistant..I didnt really enjoy the end.

Over all I think this was extreamly close but WL just edged this with a more gripping verse.

Good topical battle though...peace