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Old 02-08-04, 03:46 PM   #12
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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aiight.

punches
Diverse hit harder in this catergory
Quote:
This is my cue to win, i'm about to rack this herbs nerves
Don't even need a sidewalk to have your verse curbed


compared to this

Quote:
i found em at 2 am an thats about as good as his verse but dont go down on him on his last battle this times worse //


diverse was conistant, whilst with brainstorm hardly had any dope [unches.

personals
diverse took this one easily

Quote:
looks like his brainstorm turned into a week long shower
10 minutes spits means he can actually have an hour


the best punch of battle!!

brainstorm had no quoteable personals.

structure
braimstorm that was the worst structure i seen in a while,
you gotta write it like diverse's
short lines,
about the same length,
an take out the '//'



flow
couldn't really catch any, in brainstorms,
diverse's was consistant, an nice.


overall
diverse took it by a long shot,
everything about his verse was just better than brainstorms, an diverse didn't really have an ill verse!!

brainstrom just keep elevating an fix your structure!!

peace
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