I was feeling the poem... on some parts as i scanned the poem
i thought that they wouldnt sound right b/c the lines are extremely
uneven but as I was reading everything seemed to fall in place
this poem has some good metaphors.. you really gave the addiction
personality traits... and brought out just how evil this thing is...
on a whole i give it a 6... 1 bein the lowest... Keep Writing

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