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Old 02-08-04, 04:45 PM   #3
shawty"B"
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From: Tha many wishes that people make in their dreams...tha depths of a cutters cuts...as shallow as they seem
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this is a gud peice...you kud add a lil bit more to it tho bcuz there waz very little imagery in this

............fav part............


Lost in the abyss missing familiar feelings
I thought I had no limit til i hit the glass ceiling
Now I feel opressed depressed and full of spite see
Regret cuz I can't accept that you used to like me
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