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Old 02-08-04, 07:36 PM   #23
Holmes Jr.
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Love topicals are too damn played but this was still good stuff, the diff phases made it a good read the vocab was really good sounded real poetic to me, the flow was good if you threw a beat on top of this and made it an audio song it would sound mad good...keep it up 7/10
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