it was a simple put poem, with good thoughts, and thoughts shown well. the topic wasnt dragged out, and i thought the lenght was good, for repeating poems can get really boring it they are longer. it flowed well, but sounded really goo like a slow spoken piece, structure was good and vocab was basic. i thought the content was well written and wasnt choppy. nice work.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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