decent drop that had mad heart behind it, sort-a like you felt this although tha topic is played to an extreme...
although you say forget it: i thought your vocab and your complexity was there and you held on to it but at some parts i lost tha flow, something that tha change in rhyme scheme (both internal and end line) probably did...
overall, a nice drop and expect to keep reading your om's...

7 / 10

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