View Single Post
Old 02-08-04, 09:09 PM   #8
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
 
LyRiCaL GeEnUs's Avatar
 
Posts: 730
From: GhEtTo
IP:

Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
ok...kinda played idea
Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
LMAO...Nice..Dope punch and personal
Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
ok
Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
blah
He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
1st line is nice..2nd is jus ok
Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing
ok..played concept
__________________

Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
ok punch and personal
You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
ok
Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
good concept...ok delivery
I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
lol...nice punch
Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
ehh..kinda played
It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did
blah..played

I give this to Diverse..I think he came with harder personals and punches..Also was more creative in his lines. Phoeniix came well..but had too much filler and played stuff. Win=DIverse

Please drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you..Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786