Yo what up was tight and had pretty decent punches at all with metaphors, but no wordplay whatsoever............yo what up needs to learn how to flow, his verse was kind of ill you could say jus a bit.........but da typed lines had no structure, lacked potential, looked newbish, and threw me off.........I had to read his bullshit twice jus to understand wtf he was saying.........anyways lyric did a good job all around especially with da personals which were better than any of yo whats up basic shit..........both of ya'll need to elevate but dis battle is far from whack and stil good..
vote= lyric
*vote on ma battles, thanks*
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