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Old 02-08-04, 09:24 PM   #18
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Word Definate and SLik took this easy.
Teflon had a basic verse....That rhyme scheme was ok..but your punches and personals were mad played and extremly simplistic.
Slik...you had a dope verse...nice personals and punches. Creative too...like the comedy mixed in also.
Proof...you came basic too. Talked too much about yourself and not enough about your 2 opponents. Simple rhyme scheme..you had some ok punches..but some were played too..like the gay/sex jokes
WD...good overall verse..lines were stretched at times.. I didn't like your rhyme scheme..but it didn't hurt your verse...

Slik and WD ripped their opponents...They came hard and the others halfassed it it seemed.

Please drop honest votes here guys. All 4 of you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786
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