nice, decent drop...
although a played topic (specially lately, why? Valentine's day?) you came at it from a different angle, you used tha aspect of love as a thing that connects two people's destiny, something touched upon by philosophers and not hip hop artists, props...
tha vocab and complexity was a lil too much for a piece like this unless you were tryin to make us evision love as a complex being, then it was set where it was...
tha flow was near perfect and that's always a good thing...
overall, nice story and a nice hook that kept me reading, keep droppin...

8 / 10

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