this piece was coo celestial...
of few of the lines i've seen before..i mean something similar..like:
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Originally Posted by Celestial
sign from god, but yet the story tells
bells ring but nothings heard, silent yells
screams bring light but yet darkness still falls gray
the vision seems clear but yet it fades away
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im not saying i've seen exactly the same..but similar concept wise..
however...this piece had its stand out points...
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Originally Posted by Celestial
legends become real, and life becomes scripted
blind men seeing, def hearing.. not gifted?
electricity shortage, but yet the light still shines
no pulse, breaths gone, but still a working mind
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that right there is dope...different from what i've read
more consistency with the originality will
equal in extreme dopeness....
For now..just start off stronger cuz the ending was cool...
nice drop...peace