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Old 02-09-04, 12:02 AM   #19
Holmes Jr.
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Flow- Both flows felt kind of forced to me at times but Timeless's read smoother so he gets this one..

Punches- Timeless hit way harder, you slipped up on the Saddam punch but the other ones were mad hot

Personals- T-West had more personals, even though most of them were just about his name, I still liked them better than those 1 or 2 Timeless threw in there

Multies- Didn't see any, blah

Vocab- Timeless had more complex vocab and his wordplay was better overall, T-West had some nice words in there but just couldn't top Timeless

Originality- Blah, both were just typical battle verses

Overall- I really liked this battle, it was pretty good. You were both hittin it up pretty hard but I just felt that Timeless had a better idea of what he was doing...congrats
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