Nice Drop Man. . Although I Believe You Said No One Has Written Anything Like This Before ? Correct Me If I'm Wrong. . But I've Written A Piece Similar To This, Broken Down Into 3 Diffrent Verses And It's Called "Full Circle". . Anyway, This Was Pretty Good Man, Like Pot1ent Said, Complexity Can Be Questioned, You Might Have Over Done What You Were Trying To Get Across. . The Sheer Emotion Of This Piece Kept Me Reading, Awesome Job With The Emotional Aspect Of This. . Structure Was Fucked, But Damn, Solid Flow Man. . This Proves That Fucked Structures Can Still Have Great Flows. . Keep Dropping Man, And I'll Keep Viewing, Pz.

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