Underateds verse was ok. Seemes like you haven't been doing many topicals thought. Seems like you were just spreading yourself too thin. I like the concept of hate from many peopls different eyes. The concept allon was the best thing about the verse.
Rule, you came in like a topical vet. The wording was nice. The flow was nice. It just seemes like this verse had more thought put into it. I enjoyed reading this much more so you get my vote.
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