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Old 02-09-04, 01:33 AM   #8
Chris Black
On That Gangsta' Shit
 
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^WTF...
You broke up my verse wrong...
You split my bars in half, which made you miss the rhyme and punch every line...
If you break it up, it should have been broken like this:

You a lame bitch, and you wont be hard to kill
At rap, you’re sub-par, f’real...
...Just look up at your verse, that shit’s far from ill!
[break]
I got the 4 and You better duck when I buss this shit
Plus This is nothin’ big...
...Cause, I’ll Black ya eye like my mother fuckin’ sig!
[break]
So Put it on the record; your not erasing this killing
Halfway through the battle...
....& You not facing me, nigga you facing the ceiling!
[break]
I aim to destroy this pig when I come into town
So to win this, I gotta’ dig deep...
...Yeah, deep enough to fit his fat ass in the ground!
[break]
You the type of nigga to die when I rejected ya writing
This battle is over....
Cause I crossed you out when I connected ya hyphens!
[break]

If you dont get the structure, don't vote!...

-W1
Ask Carson from ya crew, he knows my flame is hot
Plus you had the key to victor...Until I changed the lock!
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