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Old 02-09-04, 01:37 AM   #9
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Draw a bar with this thread & seperate Tech from this wack herb...
Gone far to get some head but d/ring only elevates you back words!
nice...creative twist on a played concept
Your flows lack words ...your vocabs practically in shambles
Structure So poor ...he posted up in'a shack eatin Cambles
ok
Wins In scandals ...nothin but herb voters & noob challengers
Truth is... you only come hard lookin at homo nude calenders!
ok...kinda played
Just untalented ... it's a shame you have quality lyrics they're heated...
But that's only when absolutely nobody has to hear it or read it!
ok
Ur rep receed's itself, leave u in worlds of pain blood seeps thru realms...
U weep & tell, nothin to show wore skin inside out to say u sleep in cells!
lol nice
You need to go faster ...rhyme so slow I think you're brain dead....
Ur wordplays trash there... I dont have to mention it..it's plain said!
ok closer
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You a lame bitch, and you wont be hard to kill
At rap, you’re sub-par, f’real...
...Just look up at your verse, that shit’s far from ill!
ok set up and punch
I got the 4 and You better duck when I buss this shit
Plus This is nothin’ big...
...Cause, I’ll Black ya eye like my mother fuckin’ sig!
ok..played punch
So Put it on the record; your not erasing this killing
Halfway through the battle...
....& You not facing me, nigga you facing the ceiling!
weak
I aim to destroy this pig when I come into town
So to win this, I gotta’ dig deep...
...Yeah, deep enough to fit his fat ass in the ground!
ok
You the type of nigga to die when I rejected ya writing
This battle is over....
Cause I crossed you out when I connected ya hyphens!
nice personal
Ask Carson from ya crew, he knows my flame is hot
Plus you had the key to victor...Until I changed the lock!
played as fuck
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Tech takes this..It was close..but tech had better punches and personals...he also came less played and was more original and creative in his punches...W1cked came good...but he had too man played lines....Tech was mor consistent. Vote Tech

Please drop an honest vote here guys...Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786