Iono who is first and who is second. So here goes.

First cat : Presence is felt. Simple lyrics, commercial style, but fits the beat obviosully. Once ya voice develops definitely got potential. Flow is straight, pretty easy to ride this beat. Nuthin to complain i mean, it was straight.

Second cat : On beat..kinda...no mic presence though, sound like you straight readin off the page. After the first cat, your delivery and presence reminds me of bizare from d-12. How everyone comes in nice, then he comes in half tlakin, half asleep.

nothing HORRIBLE here. Heard alot worse.

Just work on the delivery.

.OnE HuNeD'.

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