.ill. change ya style dawg...we get what the opener and closer is dawg...jus fucks with the flow...your lines are stretched...came with too many played lines and/or concepts..try and be more creative and original with ya verse man....ANd shorten ya lines
Intox- you got this battle cause of ya personals...and punches..both were harder and more original than ills...Still a few played lines in there....but otherwise a ok verse...Vote=Intox
PLease drop an honest vote ehre guys...thanks...
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