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Old 02-09-04, 03:33 AM   #3
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Makin ya eyes black...You are white kid, get that through ur head
Fuck Axioms sig...
...You should be the representative for white Wonder Bread!

----you aren't really saying anything this isnt an "OUCH" personal

Wait a second, you can check second into a battle...but aren't you timeless
Contradictin ya own names...why don't you just call urslef Mindless

---not a punch...sorry

In my signature it states that if u PM for votes, then you'll get fucked
So then why do it and say i should have no beef...but aren't you a duck?*

----no...this is just...no

This battle like the tortoise vs the hare...either one u r, ur just too slow
Yea ya timeless...
...Cuz you don't realize your winning streak is going to go!

----this was slightly average...wording killed it

But now I wonder why your timeless? suicidal thoughts makin u cry?
Don't worry...
...I'll toss ya out a window so you can discover how time can fly

----this by far was your best punch...why? because it had a concept
it was terrible played though but rest assure this is what punches
should look like

Your record is 5-0, no wonder u gots no cents, so ya mind obsolete
You tryin to diss me like g-unit...but in the end...i'm "Cass-in- Di-Feat" **

------defeat lines are played...punches on records are gay...no concept


all in all if you follow what you said you will eliminate more of the bad ones
and end up with more or less a more consistent verse
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