seriously dope. i enjoyed reading this piece and im glad that i did. created very
strong imagery. i expected that considering the title and it did perfectly. your
word choice was very nice. you were consistent with wut you were trying
to say which is another good thing. and the structure was near flawless.

fav. line:
Even the black and whites still show the colors we created
Setting backgrounds for memories, every moment dated

^tight. keep at it.

peace

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