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Old 02-09-04, 05:42 AM   #3
DªÖ
This is my first post!
 
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dont create ur own words.
i dont wanna start on other
aspects of ur peice
because then ill have to just
drone on and on about how
not "gooder" u are...
so ...just keep on spitting
and read other peices....
deffinetly read other peices.
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